单元话题写作
本单元的话题是“自己动手制作”,主要涉及谈论利用工具手工制作一些饰品、食物等。在具体的写作中,学生应注意以下几点:
1.能用英语描述整个动手制作的过程; 2.能够表达看到手工制作成果时的心情;
3.能对自己的成果做一些安排,并提出未来的制作计划等。
【常用词汇】
instruction指示 tool工具 repair修补
advise建议,忠告,劝告 had better最好 by oneself独自 make a mistake犯错误 with one’s help在某人的帮助下 tidy up收拾,整理
go wrong弄错;犯错;(机器)出故障 be crazy about对……着迷 【常用句型】
I decided to...,and then I put... When I read...,I hope...
When you do DIY,you make,repair things or decorate things by yourself instead of paying someone to do it.
Sometimes,it takes a long time to do a DIY job.You’d better be patient. Now the living room has not only blue walls but also a blue ceiling and floor. Books couldn’t stay here because one end of the shelf was much higher than the other. We had fun working together.
【典型例题】
假设暑假期间,你在美国度假。请根据下面的要点提示,写一篇英语短文,向当地的朋友介绍怎样做西瓜冷饮。
要点:1.所需材料:一些西瓜、一杯橘汁、三勺糖、冰激凌;
2.制作过程:先切西瓜,再将西瓜放入冰箱20至30分钟,接着将其他材料倒入混合搅拌,最后放进玻璃杯。 【审题思路】
1.审人称:本文主要是向别人介绍如何制作西瓜冷饮,应以第二人称为主。 2.审时态:本文是关于西瓜冷饮的做法说明,应用一般现在时。 3.注意事项:
(1)介绍制作步骤时,可适当使用连接词,使文章条理清晰; (2)适当使用本单元所学的祈使句,使文章语言简洁明了。 【写作提纲】
引出话题:...a watermelon cooler
材料:watermelon,orange juice...具体介绍{ 制作步骤:First of all...Then...
{结尾点题:...enjoy it
【优秀范文】
Many of you must want something cold and tasty to drink in summer.Now you can DIY some,for example,a watermelon cooler.
To make a watermelon cooler,you need some watermelon,a cup of orange juice and three spoons of sugar.First of all,cut the watermelon into small pieces.Then put them into a fridge and take them out 20 to 30 minutes later.And then mix them together with the orange juice and sugar.To make the cooler nicer,you can add some ice cream in it.Now,it is finished.Put it in a glass and enjoy it!
昨天下午,你妈妈出门购物,没有时间做晚饭,于是你自己动手制作了一份简单的三明治。请根据下面的提示,以“My first DIY” 为题,写一篇英语短文。
提示:1.过程:切开面包,放上番茄酱,夹上火腿与蔬菜; 2.感受:这是第一次……
注意:1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.可适当添加内容以使行文连贯。
My first DIY
My mother went out for shopping yesterday afternoon.She didn’t have much time to cook dinner for me.I decided to make a sandwich for dinner by myself.First,I cut the bread into pieces.Then I put some tomato sauce on a piece of bread.Next I put some ham and vegetables on it.In the end,I put another piece of bread on the top of it and got a wonderful sandwich.It took about 15 minutes to finish.I made a mistake when I read the instructions on the food bag.
After that I felt excited and had a good time having my sandwich and drinking coffee.This was the first time I cooked dinner for myself.I hope I will learn a lot about cooking meals in the future.