建议信
这三种类型的书信都是先提到某个问题,然后提出建议或要求。所不同的是,“建议信”的接收对象一般是个人或团体;“倡议信”的接收对象是公众;“反映信”的接收对象是权力部门或媒体,且问题描述较多,建议相对较少。高考中的“建议信”大部分是对“求助信”的回复。
写建议信时,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。通常包括:
1. 说明写信目的或反映某种情况;2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
常用句必背
1. 关于你在上一封信中提到的问1. With regard to the problem you mentioned
in your last letter, my suggestions are as
题,我的建议如下:
follows:
2. I’m terribly sorry to hear that you have
2. 听说你和别人相处不好,我感到非常难过。
trouble fitting in with others.
3. I am writing to give you some advice on how to improve your spoken English.
3. 我写信是想给你一些关于如何4. I am writing to draw your attention to some
improper behavior among us students,
提高英语口语的建议。
littering and wasting.
4. 我写信是想提醒你注意我们学5. I wonder if the school could place more
dustbins around and set up specific rules
生之间的一些不当行为,乱扔垃圾和浪费。
5. 我想知道学校是否可以在周围放更多的垃圾箱,针对这种行为建立具体的制度。
6. 同时,应鼓励学生养成良好的习惯、规范他们自己的行为。 7. 下次何不尝试着用汉语给我写信?
against such behavior.
6. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves.
7. Why not try and write me in Chinese next time?
8. It would be a good idea if you could do more reading to enlarge your vocabulary. 9. I feel that it will prove helpful if you stick to it.
10. I will always be there for you if you need help.
11. I call on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer
8. 如果你能多读书来扩大词汇量,那是个好主意。
9. 我认为如果你坚持下去,它将证明是有帮助的。
10. 如果你需要帮助,尽管说。 11. 我呼吁大家采取行动,为使我们的学校成为一个更好的地方作出贡献。
12. 如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
place.
12. So I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion
常用的表示建议的方法
1. 利用suggest, advise等词
1. I strongly suggest you stick to the plan. 2. First, it is important/ necessary to take
2. 利用necessary, important, good,wise等形容词
3. 利用名词good idea
4. 利用情态动词can 5. 利用情态动词should
6. 利用had better 7. 利用祈使句 8. 利用help等动词
9. Why not…/ Why don’t you… 10. How/What about…?/What do you think of…?
11. 利用if条件句
12. 利用it’s time for you to do或it’s high
a Chinese course.
3. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. 4. You can also make more Chinese friends.
5. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves.
6. You had better discuss it with your parents.
7. And third, remain optimistic about your future.
8. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books.
9. Why not give her a call and tell her the truth?
10. How about having a heart-to-heart with him? It might clear up the misunderstanding.
11. If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice.
time that…
12. Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.
疯狂背诵
1. 写信告诉peter如何学好中文(2008 全国II卷)
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。 请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1. 参加中文; 2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。
亲爱的彼得,
我很高兴收到你的来信,寻求
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here
关于如何学好汉语的建议。这里有are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese
一些建议。
course, as you’ll be able to learn from the
首先,参加一门中文课程是很teacher and practice with your fellow students.
Then, it also helps to watch TV and read
重要的,因为你可以向老师学习并
books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese
与同学们一起练习。此外,只要有whenever possible. Besides, it should be a
good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,
时间,看电视和阅读中文书籍、报纸和杂志它也有帮助。此外,学习和唱中文歌曲应该是一个好主意,因为这样你会更容易地学习和记忆汉语单词。你也可以结交更多的中国朋友。他们会告诉你很多关于中国的情况,会帮助你学习汉语。
下次试着用中文给我写信。 致以最美好的祝福。
because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes Li Hua
李华
常用短语或词汇
ask for advice a Chinese course
② 一门汉语课程 ③ 同学 ④ 交朋友
④
高级句式(语法填空)
First, it is important _______(take) a Chinese course.
②
① 寻求建议
①
fellow students make friends with sb.
Then, it also helps to watch TV and read _______ (book).
③
_______, it should be a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs.
You can also make more Chinese _______ (friend).
2. 回复容易发脾气的求助信(2014安徽卷)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提
出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪。
你好,“担心”:
很抱歉得知你目前处于困难时期。事实是,每个人都会有这样
Hi, Worried,
I'm sorry to learn that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when
一个似乎事事不顺心的时期,所以things seem to be going wrong, so you don't
have to worry much. What's important is to
你不必担心。重要的是要学会控制
learn to control your temper so that you may
自己的脾气,这样你就不会做一些not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are
three useful tips:
你后悔的事或说一些你后悔的话。
First, talk to someone you trust about how
这里有三个有用的秘诀:
首先,和一个你信任的人谈谈你的感受。这是一个释放你的愤怒
you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an
而不伤害别人或自己的好办法。其effective way to get rid of anger. And third,
remain optimistic about your future. Such a
次,去户外和朋友一起进行体育活
positive attitude towards life can be helpful in
动,因为体育锻炼是消除愤怒的有lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry
效方法。第三,对你的未来保持乐观。这样一种积极的生活态度可以帮助你振作你的精神。
我希望你会很快平静下来,继续你正常的生活。
你的, 杰米
on as normal.
Yours, Jamie
常用短语或词汇
① 控制你的control
temper
脾气
tip
②
高级句式(语法填空)
your
The truth is _______ everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong.
What’s important is_______ learn to control your temper.
①
② 窍门,技巧 an effective way
remain optimistic
③ 一种有效lift spirits
carry on
的方式
③
Such a positive attitude _______ life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
④
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry _______ as normal.
④ 保持乐观 ⑤ 振作士气 ⑥ 进行;坚持
3. 针对校园中随意涂写和乱丢垃圾行为向校长提建议(2011浙江卷)
假设你是高中生李华,有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾(to litter)的行为,请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容:1. 说明写信目的;2. 对这些行为进行批评;3. 提出建议。
注意:信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出(不计词数)。
尊敬的校长先生,
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1,
我是李玥,一名来自高二(1)Senior 2. I am writing to draw your attention
to some improper behavior among us
班的学生。我想提请您注意我们学
students, littering and scribbling. It makes our
生中的一些不得体的行为:乱扔垃school dirty and does harm to the image of
our school. I always feel ashamed whenever
圾和涂鸦。它使我们的学校肮脏而
q329950885 I see this. It is not appropriate for
且有损我们学校的形象。每当我看a student to litter and scribble about. I
wonder if the school could place more dustbins
到这些,我总是感到羞愧。学生到处乱扔垃圾,乱涂乱画是不合适的。我想知道学校是否可以放置更多的垃圾箱,并针对这种行为建立
around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in
具体的制度。同时,应鼓励学生养the near future. 成良好的习惯和行为举止。我相信,在老师和学生的共同努力下,
Li Yue
我们的学校在不久的将来会成为一个更令人愉快的地方。
Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully,
谢谢您的考虑。 你忠诚的, 李玥
常用短语或词汇
① 引起你的draw
attention to
注意 ② 乱丢垃圾 ③ 对……有害 ④ 形象 ⑤ 感到羞愧 ⑥ 适当的 ⑦ 守规矩
litter do harm to image feel shamed appropriate behave oneself
④ ③ ②
高级句式(语法填空)
your
I am writing to draw your attention ______ some improper behavior among us students. It is not appropriate ______ a student to litter and scribble about.
Students should be encouraged to develop good habits and behave ______.
I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more ______ (enjoy) place.
①
4. 给学汉语感到吃力的留学生朋友一些可行的建议
假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说,他正在学汉语,但感觉很吃力,请求你给予帮助。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:1.举例说明汉语学习的特点;2.提供一些可行的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
亲爱的彼得,
过得可好?我从你的来信,你
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I learn from your last letter that you are learning Chinese
正在学习中文,遭遇到一些困难。and encounter some problems. It’s inevitable
because English emphasizes the structure,
这是不可避免的,因为英语重结
while Chinese focuses on the meaning. With
构,而汉语重意义。关于你在信中regard to the problem you mentioned in your
letter, my suggestions are as follows:
提到的问题,我的建议如下:
首先,我建议你找一个母语为英语人作为语言学习的伙伴,并定
Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker to be your language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis. Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to
期与他见面。此外,电影、Chinese songs can make the learning process
much more interesting.
听中文歌曲可以使学习过程更有趣。
我会很高兴为您提供帮助。我希望这些建议对你有用。
你的, 李华
I would always be pleased to offer you help. I hope these suggestions will prove beneficial to you.
Yours, Li Hua
常用短语或词汇
encounter problems
② 不可避免的 ③ 强调 ④ 关于 ⑤ 如下
inevitable emphasize with regard to as follows on a regular basis be beneficial to
④ ③ ②
高级句式(语法填空)
some
English emphasizes the structure, _______ Chinese focuses on the meaning.
_______ regard to the problem you mentioned in your letter, my suggestions are as _______ (follow):
I would recommend you to find a native speaker to be your language partner, and meet with him _______ a regular basis. I hope these suggestions will be _______
① 遇到问题
①
⑥ 经常的,例行的 ⑦ 对……有益
(benefit) to you.
5. 向全校学生倡议“根除陋习、创建文明校园”
假定你校正在开展 “根除陋习、创建文明校园” 活动。请你以此为主题用英语写一篇发言稿,向全校学生倡议:1. 根除乱扔垃圾、浪费食物、吸烟……; 2. 提倡讲礼貌、互助……。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
亲爱的朋友们,
Dear friends,
As is known to all, our school has
众所周知,我们学校发起了一launched a campaign against bad habits in
order to establish a civilized campus. But I
场反对陋习的运动,以创建文明校
have noticed that a lot of bad behavior still
园。但是我注意到学校里还存在着exists in our school, which does great harm to
the image of our school.
许多不良行为,这对我们学校的形象造成了很大的危害。
因此,我强烈建议学生停止随便扔垃圾、随地吐痰。此外,任何人都不应该说下流话或浪费食物。象吸烟和打架等这样的不良行为
Therefore, I strongly suggest that we students stop throwing rubbish anywhere and spitting in public. Besides, no one should make dirty remarks or waste food. Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus. At the same time, we should have good manners wherever we are.
Once again I call on everyone to take
也应从校园中清除。同时,无论我action and contribute to making our school a 们在哪里,都要有礼貌。
nicer place.
That’s all. Thank you.
我再一次呼吁大家采取行动, 为使我们的学校成为一个更好的地方作出贡献。
我的演讲完了。 谢谢大家。
常用短语或词汇
① 发起一场launch a campaign
establish
运动
civilized campus
a
②
高级句式(语法填空)
_______ is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against bad habits. Such bad manners _______ smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus.
③
①
② 建立文明the image of our
school
校园
call on sb. to do
I call on everyone to take action and contribute to_______ (make) our school a nicer place.
③ 我们学校sth.
contribute to
的形象 ④ 号召 ⑤ 有助于
模拟练习
6. 倡议帮助贫困山区的孩子
我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为
家庭贫穷而上不起学。你们班就如何帮助这些孩子进行了讨论。假如你是李华,请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给China Daily,希望该报能够呼吁更多的人们和社会团体关注并参与其中。要点如下:1. 自拟建议至少两条 2. 表明写信目的
注意: 1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor, I’m
a
senior
high
school
student.______________________ ________________________________________________
________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua
7. 朋友沉迷于电脑游戏
假设你是李华,你的朋友John最近沉迷于电脑游戏不能自拔,请你介绍其危害,如:严重影响学习和身心健康,并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议,如:多参加运动和社交活动。
注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 Dear John,
________________________________________________
________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
8. 反映有关共享单车的问题
假定你是李华,你所在的城市为
了改善环境,最近推出了“摩拜单车”(mobike)公共自行车租借活动。租用的人很多,但出现了乱停乱放,占用机动车道和故意破坏等现象。请你用英语给ChinaDaily的编辑写一封信,反映这一社会问题,并针对以上
现象提出改进措施。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以
适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开
头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear editor,
I am glad to find more and more public bicycles are provided in the street
for
people
to
rent.
_______________
_______________________________
_________________
________________________________________________
I hope this bicycle renting project will help build better traffic and improve the air quality in the city.
Yours Li Hua 9. 给生病的朋友写信
假如你叫Mary, 你的朋友Jane
生病了,主要是因为工作太辛苦,又
缺乏锻炼。请你写一封信给她,劝她
每天至少要运动一个小时,并告诉
她;你明天休息,将去看望她。(字数:80~100)
My dear Jane,
________________________________________________
________________________________________________ Yours,
Mary
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